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Saturday 17 December 2011

Realisation of love Part 4

its morning time in the modi bhawan and every one is back to their normal routine...
jigar has been upset due to the recent developments at his home and his love life. he does not want to see rashi at all and asks her to pack her belongings to shift in the guest room.. he warns her about dire consequences if she does not stop scheming against the family and walks away from there..
rashi is shattered and cant believe jigar being harsh on her. she wants to put forward her situation and tell him that she did not have any motive behind all her misdeeds. She was under the influence of her mother who always wanted an upper hand in the Modi property.. she could not understand the feelings she had for jigar. she felt a magnetic attraction which was constantly pushing her towards jigar. But how can jigar believe her now after she has broken so many hearts... how can he trust her when she deceived him? how can he love her when she did not understand the meaning of love...?? 
both of them were undergoing an emotional turmoil and could not concentrate on their work.. the pain in their eyes could be clearly seen... they were standing on crossroads where the exact way is unknown to them.. jigar gets flashbacks of the time he had spent with rashi and how she had ignored him..

In the hotel, gopi is getting ready while ahem is still sleeping... he wakes up and finds her struggling with the strings of the blouse and keeps admiring her... Gopi gets a glimpse of ahem staring at her and tries to cover up but ahem grabs hold of her and tickles her.. she revolts but finally gives up and enjoys the precious moment.. both of them get ready and head out for sight seeing.. gopi, like a kid, screams and shouts in excitement on seeing all the high mountains etc and ahem is left with no option but to smile on her innocence.. they have lunch and then head out for shopping... Ahem takes gopi to a mall and once again gopi is awestruck and is very happy to be in the mall.. she looks in all corners to check out how spacious the mall is!! Ahem buys a sari for her and asks the salesman to pack it separately and then asks Gopi to choose the clothes she liked the most..  she chooses a sari each for every one and sherwani for all the men.. she traps ahem in her talks and buys a special sherwani for him and asks the salesman to pack it in a separate packet.. after the shopping they walk on the roads and have fun in the cool atmosphere.. they then have an icecream and get back to the hotel...
ahem opens the door for gopi and locks it from inside... he catches her from the pallu and drags her back into his embrace.. and kisses her on the forehead, cheeks, neck and keeps tickling her... gopi feels shy and tries to run away from the embrace but ahem stops her and they both share a hug!

Monday 12 December 2011

realisation of love

gopi was loving the attention she was getting... she just wanted the time to stop there. she wanted each and every second to pass by as hours.. it was a magical feeling for her..
ahem was also occupied in his own ocean of thoughts and talked to himself..

i have done a lot of injustice to her. how could i ignore her when i knew that she is innocent and has not done anything wrong.. how could i believe everyone else but GOPI.. she has always been loyal to me and spoke truth to me.. she never betrayed me.. but I? I betrayed her for ANITA??  a girl who never cared for my feelings!  she loved me for the money and fame!! oh God!! i can't believe that night... that was one of the horrible nights i have ever had...FLASHBACK:-
ahem had arranged a meeting with anita to celebrate his first meeting with her. he was all ready to go and had excused himself from all works of the day.. For anita, he even lied to his mom about having a personal meeting with a client.. But his kaka wanted him to go to the office urgently as delegates from U.S.A were coming and jigar had gone to pick them from the air port. he was in a dilemma regarding the already made plans.. but he finally decided to go to the office as he could meet anita anytime but the delegates(n his work) was much important for him..
he took out his phone and typed a text message for anita.
hello, baby.. i can't  meet u.. i am sorry.. hv sm urgent meeting..
Anita fumed with anger as ahem had already broken a lot of promises.. he had also forgot their anniversary.. she sent her a series of messages..
oh! so now your work is more important to you
i have no value for you..
ahem, don't you love me?
ahem.. please reply...
ahem, have i done something wrong?
hey, please forgive me
ahem, what's wrong with you
whom do you think, you are showing this attitude to?
ok, dont reply.. i am not free to waste my time on you..
i hate you ahem..
Ahem could not see any of the message as he was busy in the meeting. as soon as he finished the meeting, he checked his cell and was irritated to get 10 messages from anita.. he wanted to throw his cell phone and vent out his anger.. but all he could do is send a text message to anita:-
hey i am sorry, was busy in a meeting.. coming to meet you Smile
anita:- no need to come.. stay happy with your office life and uneducated wife.. you have no feelings for me.. i have always been friendly to you.. i am the type of a girl which you always wanted- class minded, highly educated, modern, romantic... so how dare you ignore me? AHEM, please chose one of us.. either GOPI or ME
PRESENT
oh God!! I am glad that i broke off with anita and chose to spend my life with Gopi.. that lady wanted to rule over me.. how could she!! Am i not a human being!!... Don't I have feelings?
Ahem was so occupied in his thoughts that he did not realize a truck coming in front of his speedy car and was brought back to reality by Gopi..
AHEM jiii

Ahem quickly changed the gears and brought the car on a normal speed..
he now made a firm decision of making gopi the happiest person in his life..
they reached their hotel room and as they both were tired.. ordered food and took a quick nap..
*Ting Tong**Ting Tong*
ahem woke up on the sound of a bell and took the food in the room :) he did not want to disturb her wife, so he let her sleep for a longer period and decided to lay the table for them..
After a few minutes gopi woke up, ' arre ahem ji, khana aa gya, apne mujhe utha diya hota.. m kr deti sb kuch..
ahem:- sshhh, ab tum bs yha pr baithi rho.. maine sb kuch kr liya hai na..
he brings a plate for both of them and keeps it on the bed..

he prepares a bite and takes it to gopi's mouth but she refuses..
ahem:- khao chup chap..
ahem again feeds her and now gets very close to her.. he hugs her like a small baby and starts feeding him... they both take turns and feed each other...

Sunday 11 December 2011

MY LADY LOVE.. ~~A VIRMAN SS~~



viren was taken aback with such a condition from jeevika.. he could not decide what to speak. he already knew, how dear maanvi was to jeevika, and he also knew how much he loved jeevika.. he could not afford to lose anyone! Giving up doesn't always mean you are weak; sometimes it means that you are strong enough to let go.

he finally thought of letting jeevika be with her sister and postpone the marriage until manvi was perfectly fine.

viren:- hmari shadi manvi k thik hone pr hi hogi.. abhi sb uska dhyan rakho..
jeevika had tears in her eyes:- thankyou viren ji... she ran upto him and hugged him for the first time!! you are the best husband viren ji...
viren:- you are also the best sister and a best wife and hugged her tighter..
BG was happy to see the love in both of them and had tears in her eyes for the pain viren was undergoing.. he had to sacrifice his wedding for manvi..
beeji blessed them and went away from their.. jeevika could see her pain.. every one was in an emotional turmoil.. no one could resist to show their real feelings and burst out crying.. jeevika could not bear all this and ran up to viren but was shocked to see him cry too.. they wiped off each others tears and shared a hug.

virat was lost in the thoughts of manvi getting flashbacks of all happy moments spent with her,  every nok jhok and her bubbly face.. he still could not believe her being ill..
he decided that he would confess his feelings to her..

Wednesday 30 November 2011

urshi in jail, gohem all the way part 2

LAST PART

jigar tries to put a brave face in front of everyone and cracks a joke to make the atmosphere a bit funny..

every one laugh their heart out only to find jigar crying.. ahem hugs jigar and tries to console him.. they have a cute conversation!!

ahem:- jigar, why are you crying for a lady who betrayed you?
jigar:- bhai, it is true that she betrayed me.. but i loved her from the bottom of my heart.. i cant imagine my life without her..
ahem:- jigar, i know it would be difficult for you, but see you have to be strong and move on.. & we all r with you.
jigar:- thanks bhai.. with my family around me, i am sure.. i ll forget everything and start life afresh... but
ahem:- jigar, dont worry about anything... n yeah, if you want, i can give you a project for which u ll have to travel around 10 states in India... should i??
jigar(excitedly):_ bhai!!! what all states would i travel??
ahem:- ummm, u ll travel Jammu & Kashmir, Nagaland, Andhra pradesh, Kerela, Punjab Chattisgarh, Goa, n a few cities too.. U have to plan out a survey on various construction sites and prepare a report.. we have a few delegate coming from australia for a deal!!
jigar:- wow bhai!! i am ready for this :) thank you bhai... U are the best bhai in the world:)
Ahem is happy that now as jigar will start working, he will easily forget rashi and start a new life..
he was also very excited to go out with gopi according to his plan..


he calls his mom and asks her to pack things for gopi and that she should not get to know anything about the surprise!!

he calls up a hotel manager and books a room for both of them...



he drives back home and on his way stops to buy a saree for her,

 a beautiful diamond ring and a few more gifts..




he came back home and asked gopi to get ready quickly as they had to go out for a business meeting..

both of them got ready and ahem quietly kept the bags in his car..
ahem is waiting for his princess to come down...
..
..
he was mesmerised to see gopi draped in a blue saree n she completely looked like an actress.. he simply could not move his gaze from her..
he was brought into reality by gopi...
ahem ji chale??
huh.. ha chalo..

they both sat in the car and reach the hotel...

gopi is enthralled by the preparations ahem has done for their dream date!!
she is enjoying each and every scene...
ahem:- would you be my love??(he is kneeled down and is waiting for her to progress her hand...)
gopi(shyly):- ahem ji... ye..ap..
ahem:-sshhh... siraf ha or na mein jawab do...
gopi:-y..ye..YES!!!

ahem puts the ring in her finger.. and drapes her with the saree..

gopi was extremely touched by his gesture and had tears of joy..
ahems wipes them off and says... inko sambhal kr rakho... abhi yha inki koi zarurat nhi hai...

they both smile and hug each other... ahem orders some food for both of them in the room :)
 and the scene shifts to the modi house where jigar is extremely happy and has gathered the whole family in the hall..
he tells them that he has bagged a project wherein he has to travel around 10 states of India and conduct a survey!!
 hetal:- shabaash mere bche!! kanha ji tumhe khub tarakki de...
every one is happy..


the waiter has delivered the food in gohem's room and gopi starts serving it in two different plates,, but ahem asks her to bring every thing in a single plate...
they both sit to have dinner.. ahem takes a bite and feeds it to gopi.. in the same way gopi feeds ahem...
ahem gets naughtier and he starts caressing gopi...
he asks her to continue feeding him and that he wants to be in her arms...
slowly ahem gets hold of the innocent face and gohem have their first KISS ever!!.. they were lost so much into each other that they had no idea what is going on around the..
it was just GOHEM, GOHEM, GOHEM

what if? VIRMAN OS

Ok, so we already know from the promo that beeji would not allow maanvi to attend the marriage but our maanvi -- can she stay away from her sister? lets find out..

BG:- maanvi.. 1 bat dhyan se sun lo, tum shadi m nhi aa skti to bs nhi aa skti.. or agar koi gadbad krne ki koshish ki to mujhse bura koi nhii hoga..
MANVI:- pr beeji..
BG:- bs.. mujhe kuch nhi sunna hai..
MANVI(teary eyes):- thik h bg..

she gets into her room and cries her heart out.. she gets a flashback of all the gudda guddi scenes and gets a faded smile on her face.. but is also angry on her self that why does she always land up in trouble while doing a good work!!


MANVI:- hr bar.. hr bar kuch na kuch to galat hona hi hota h mere sath.. aj us chep ki wajha se m apni di ki shadi m nhi ja paungi.. na to wo mujhe excite krta or na hi BG ko gussa ata.. m apni di k bina nhi reh paungi.. (she cries again).

JEEVIKA enters d room and senses something wrong..
Mannu, kya hua? teri tabiyat to thik hai na? dawai li tune?? kya hua tujhe.. *she holds her face* arre tu ro kyu rhi hai?
*wiping off her tears* kuch nhi di.. yeh to khushi k aansu hai.. mai apke liye bohot khush hun..
mannu... (they have an emotional hug) wherin manvi speaks in the background.. di... apko kaise btaun bg ne mujhe kya saza di hai.. mere liye isse dukh bhari nat or kya ho skti h...
*jeevika realises that she is left with very less time * mannu, tu meri madan nhi karegi taiyar hone m??
MANVI:- ha.. karungi na.. chlo!!
with watery eyes she helps her sister in putting the jewellry and all the accessories.
BG and all come into the room n completely ignore maanvi.. and take jeevika along with them..
maanvi comes along her till the door way and makes an excuse of some work..

she bolts her room and cries until she faints..

jeevika n the other ppl reach the mandap where viren is eagerly waiting for her.. as she steps in the madap, they both have a cute eye lock.. and in the back ground we have their tu hi tu song going on... 



Virat who realized Manvi is not there asks Jeevika where she is n she said ' Manvi said she will be bk in 10mins ' 

Virat waited there as he thought bhai's salli will come to take his shoes n still she is missin !! kuch plannin toh nahin kar rahi...? 
untill he hears BG& Swamini Bua's conversation 
BG: Swamini ji...Dil pe Patar rak kar meine Manvi ko uski Apni Behn Ki Shadi se Aane ke liye Mana Kardiya!! Ab Apko Koi Takleef Nahin hogi!! 

Egoistic Swamini doesn't reply but gives her the 'Good' look!! 
virat hearing this gets annoyed ' How can Bua be so heartless!! I know Manvi is a bit immature! and wat she did y-day was not right ! but she didn't mean it in a bad way! then why this? how can she tell a SISTER TO NOT ATTEND her OWN sisters Wedding? !! Harsh Much ! 

he gets really annoyed n walk upstairs looking for Manvi! and enters in there room sees Manvi on the floor unconsious !! n runs to her! sits on the floor Placing her head on his lap ' MAnvi!!! Manvi Uttho! unconscious Manvi says ' BG mujhe Maaf kardo!! Mein Kabhi... Yeh Nahin chahti !! Virat throws water on her face and Manvi comes to her sense 
Virat : Manvi tum theek toh ho!! 

she gets up and says I'm fine ! aur tum yahan Kya kar rahe ho ? !
Virat : Tumhe LENE aya Hoon !! 
Manvi gets up sayin : tum .. Jao Mein Aati hoon 

Virat : Manvi enough ! tum kab tak sabki Suno ge!! Mujhe pata hai Kya huwa!! Bua ko yeh Nahin Karna Chaiye ta!! 

Manvi : gr8 tumhe Pata chal gaya na!! u happy na ? !! Now Leave n GO ENJOY UR BROTHER's Wedding !

virat Gets annoyed n Holds her hand and drags her down stairs

Sunday 27 November 2011

ALL FOR MY LOVE!!!




Hello every one!! welcome to my fan fiction..

the characters in the story are:-
Rajan, Meeta, Aniket
Mahesh, Supriya, Anupriya
(more characters will be introduced as the story progresses)
it is a story about two families who are from a different class(in terms of money..) but are very good friends since their parents too were best friends... their marriage was fixed on the same date and in the same mandap!! and now both the ladies were in the hospital to deliver their baby...
the doctor informs everyone that meeta has delivered a baby boy and supriya has delivered a baby girl.


 a wave of happiness swept in the atmosphere and the men shared a hug. they were eager to have a sneak peak of their child...


the family had a combined naming ceremony and named their children as Aniket and Anupriya..
Both the children were dear to their parents and were the apple of their eye..
aniket and anupriya had a liking towards the opposite mother.. Aniket was happy in supriya's lap and anupriya was happy in meeta's lap.. there was no problem with it since both families lived in two seperate homes but were actually a single family..

years passed by and aniket and anupriya were put to the same school for education.

Tuesday 22 November 2011

my lady love


Manvi:- yeh chepu samajhta kya hai khud ko? m koi choti bachi hun jo khud ka dhyan nhi rakh sakti? m dr k pas khud bhi aa sakti thi. usko itni hamdardi dikhane ki kya zarurat?? she was about to speak more but again got a sudden severe headache.. she tried a lot to subdue it but could not and all she could do is hold her head tight until her mr right came and saved her from falling on the ground.. she collapsed in his arms and virat missed a heart beat. he felt needles pricking him hard on his heart.. he felt as if the whole world came to an end. he did not want his lady love to go away from his life... he carried her in his lap to her room and called the doctor home.. the news of manvi fainting spread like a fire and everyone was concerned about her specially jeevika. they tried waking manvi by sprinkling water n shaking her, but it was as if she refused to respond..
the doctor came.. he asked everyone to leave the room but virat and jeevika could not leave the most important person in such a critical condition. virat was all broken but showed a brave face in front of her dear bhabi..
the doctor examined manvi properly and prescribed her a few medicines..
jeevika:- dr, kya hua h maanvi ko? is something serious?
doctor:- oh ms jeevika, there is nothing to worry, she has a low blood pressure and is weak, so she fainted. i have given her a sleeping injection, please see to it that she is not disturbed. and take proper care of her diet and medicines..
jeevika:- sure doctor.
doctor:- mr viraat, please come out fr a moment, i want to have a word with you..
virat:- sure doctor..
virat leads the doctor out of the room and jeevika starts caressing her darling sister oblivious of the disease manvi was suffering from.
doctor:- mr viraat, its high time that manvi had an operation or her condition would worsen and she might die...
the last few words were more than enough to enrage virat and he held the dr from his collar and screamed.. what do you mean she ll die? you said that she has low bp, so how can she die?? speak up doctor speak up.. what is manvi suffering from?
doctor:- mr virat please calm down. i had to tell lie in front of her sister as i have no intentions to hurt her and make everything difficult to handle.. i suspect maanvi to have tumour in its second stage of growth, and if it is not removed now, manvi may die..
virat felt the earth slipping off his feet.. he still could not believe that a fun loving girl lyk maanvi could suffer from such a deadly disease.. he could not gather the courage to face her and his sweet bhabhi.. the doctor took leave from him and viraat banged his head on the wall as he had no excuse to cover up the truth that he could lose his lady love at any moment... he was drenched in the pool of thoughts to break the sad news to jeevika when he felt a soft hand on his shoulders.. he was shocked to see jeevika standing next to him all in tears... all he could do is hug her and cry his heart out...
 jeevika could not understand the reason for which virat was crying, so she broke the hug and asked him if everything was right!!.. bhabhi, the doctor has called us for a checkup in his clinic.. he did not tell me the exact disease manvi is suffering but he needs to do certain tests..
jeevika is tensed for maanvi and could not sleep that night as she wondered her future with manvi. there virat could not sleep as he could not let his lady love die. she had the right to get all the happiness and viraat could do ANYTHING for his lady love. Amidst all the confusion, tension, a new morning came up and virat and jeevika took permission from their family members to take manvi out for shopping(on pretext of a check up). virat had already informed his family about the condition of manvi, so no one objected. beeji was apprehensive to send manvi with virat so swamini asked viren to accompany them.
the couple first goes to a cinema n then shopping.here both of them do different shopping.. virman for virika n virika for virman.. they then roam around in the mall where once again manvi gets dizzy and faints.. virat informs viren to move to the doctors clinic and he would bring manvi too..
all four now meet at the doctors clinic and are worried about manvi... the doctor administers her an injection and asks virat if they are ready for the surgery.. jeevika gets a shock of her life and questions the dr.. dr please tell me what has happened to my mannu? what is the need of a surgery? viren tries to calm her down but all in vain... doctor:- ms jeevika, ur sister is suffering from brain tumour and it is in its second stage. if not operated she may die.. so please hurry up and decide what is to be done.. and inform me so that i can decide on a date to do the surgery..

viren asked jeevika to get back home but she refused and gave her consent for the surgery.. the doctor asked them to call him the next day for further details...
as the night progressed, tension brewed up in the choudhary mansion.. every one was anxious to hear the doctor's verdict!! mannu was sleeping like a small baby in jeevika's lap and beeji was sitting besides them.. the vadhera brothers were walking to n fro like a zombie in the courtyard... time passed by and the phone rang- making everyone stop their breath...
beeji:- hello
dr:- hello, can i speak to mr virat?
beeji:- he is sleeping, please tell us and we ll convey the message..
dr:- oh, actually.. i had to talk to him about manvi's operation.. our panel of doctors have decided to operate her next week on the 30th of this month.. please bring her to the hospital on 28th as we have to admit her in the ward..(beeji was shocked and had no words to speak... )
beeji:- ok, sure doctor! thanks for the information.

jeevika:- beeji, kya kha doctor ne?
beeji, 28th ko manvi ko admit karenge or 30 ko operation..
virat:- pr bhai, us din to bhabhi ki mehndi hai or 30 ko ap dono ki shadi...
beeji:- ha, maine unko btaya.. pr wo mane nhi...

jeevika felt that all her dreams had shattered and she could not handle anything... she stood there like a statue--- expressionless and numb...

viren:- beeji, hm shadi postpone kr dete h... manvi ka operation zyada zaruri hai...
jeevika:- nhi viren ji, shadi to usi din hogi... pr hm shadi k bad sidha hospital jayenge...
beeji:- jeevika:- aise shadi k bad hospital...?
beeji:- tum pagal to nhi ho gyi ho na? jeevika, dono m se 1 chuno... shadi ya hospital...
jeevika:- beeji, shadi k liye or koi shubh din nhi milega hme... hm yha pr shadi krne k bad manvi k pas jayenge... main dr se bat kr lungi, wo manvi ka operation sham ko kr denge... please beeji..
beeji looks at viren and signals him to answer..

Saturday 19 November 2011

urshi in jail gohem all the way!!

a short story on what can happen after kokila discovers the motive behind the sudden arrival of  nani in modi bhawan.

 it is dinner time and gopi is serving food to every one. suddenly the door bell rings and every one wonders who may come at such a point of night. kokila opens the door and is thrilled to see her mother on the door. she is surprised as her mother came without any prior notice but controls her curiosity.  every one greets nani and nani is very happy to meet her grand children- gopi and ahem.
she takes dinner with every one and talks about her trip to haridwar.
she then asks about rashi and everyone give her an excuse about rashi's whereabouts. Nani gets convinced and gets up to retire and asks kokila to meet her in her room as soon as she finishes her work.
kokila is enthusiastic to talk to her mom so completes all the work in a hurry and asks gopi to manage everything. she takes milk for her mom and proceeds..
koki(to herself):- maa achanak se kaise aa gyi? aj tk to aisa kabhi nhi hua ki maa bina phone kiye ayi ho.. kuch to gadbad h... lgta h maa kuch chupa rhi hai...
pta krna padega warna agar maa ne rashi k bare mein fir se puch liya to musibat khadi ho sakti hai..

she knocks at the door and greets her mother..
maa yeh lijiye dudh.. apka safar kaisa rha?
koili safar to acha tha par auto wala bohot paise leta hai or time bhi bohot lga diya usne..

maa ap auto se kyu ayi..? ane se pehle phone kr diya hota.. ahem aa jata lene..

arre main yha khud nhi ayi hun... 

khud nhi ayi hun matlab?? kon aya h apke sath??

arre mere ghar jigar ki bahu ayi thi.. whi layi hai.. mujhe ghar k bahar chod k pta nhi kha chli gyi.. uski maa bhi thi sath..  dono ko khi koi kam hoga isiliye mujhe yja chodkr chli gyi..

nhi maa un dono ko koi kaam nhi tha.. rashi ko hamne ghar se nikal diya hai or ab dono maa beti is ghar mein kadam rakhne k liye koi na koi bahana dhundti rehti hain.. jab or koi paintra na chla to unhone apki madad lene ki koshish ki..

pr koili bat kya hui hai? jigar ki bahu ko nikala kyu??
kokila narrates all incidents starting from the marriage and how urshi have always tortured gopi and how rashi wanted to become the queen of the modi bhawan..

kokila's mother is shocked when she gets to know the real face of urshi. she comes up with a plan and shares it with kokila..
koili kl hm un dono ko ghar bulayenge or main unse bat karungi.. agar to wo dono apni galti man jati hai to rashi is ghar mein vapis aa sakti hai warna main unko unke asli thikane pr pahuncha dungi..
kokila could not go against her mother so accepted to help her in the plan..
the next morning kokila calls at the shah house and jeetu picks the call. kokila tells him that nani has come and she wishes to meet urshi so they should come to the modi bhawan as soon as possible.. jeetu was happy but kokila still had no clue if she was doing the right thing..

she turned back and was stunned to see the whole family standing in front of her with horrified looks on their faces..
the scene shifts where  ahem was sitting in the balcony, sipping tea and remembering all the golden moments where he and gopi had a hug!! he also remembers how badly has he hurt her and how she cried on being denied education.. he felt bad for her and wanted to compensate for everything.. he wanted to start life afresh!!

he wanted her to experience all the happiness of life and cherish each moment!! he planned a surprise for gopi..
ahem took permission from his mom and gave her a slight hint about his plan.. kokila was happy that ahem now cared for gopi and wished to spend time with her. she took the blessings of God and ashed Him to bless her children.
at night after finishing all work, gopi comes into her room and laid her bedding on the floor... she was surprised to see ahem packing his bag and goes near him...

ahem ji apko madad chahiye?? layiye ise main kr deti hun...
ahem responds in negative and still continues his work..
she lies down and doses off to sleep in no time.. ahem gets mesmerized on seeing her sleep..
he completes the packing and sleeps..

the next morning, every one is stunned as police has visited the modi mansion..
ahem is in his usual angry mood and keeps mumbling.. pehle maa-beti ko bulaya, ab police ko bhi bula liya.. mom ap akhir krna kya chahte ho!!! kokila and nani bring out the true face of urshi and also show the video footage of them doing various kalakari's..

the police has no option left other than to arrest them and close in a lock up...
jigar is deeply hurt at all this and longs to run towards rashi but controls immediately as he does not want to see her face ever...

Tuesday 11 October 2011

realisation of love

She had been crying from the past 30 minutes like a small baby who has lost a favorite toy..  
how can i celebrate my birthday on a day when my parents left me.. how can i celebrate happiness when the only source of happiness in my life left me.... no ahem ji.. i wont celebrate my birthday... i don't want to disturb the soul of my parents... 
ahem:- gopi.. who has told you are the reason behind your parents death??  
my mami told me.
ahem:-  and you believed it?? gopi i have spoken with your mamaji.. he has told me the truth of your parents death.. they died in an accident not on the day of your birth... Why are you taking responsibility of such a thing which u can never do???  

 ji... i have always respected my mami... as she was the only one left for me in this world after the death of my parents.. i always tried to make her happy..and find happiness in every little event that happened around me.. U only tell me... how could i disrespect them when they were the only one to provide me with shelter.. 
i dont know anything gopi.. get ready fast and come down... i   have to show you something..
 ji ahem ji
 downstairs 
ahem has called jitu,dhawal, kokila,jigar,parag and chirag in the hall..
jitu:- kya hua ahem dikra..tumne aise achanak hi bula liya??
kokila:- ha ahem..bat kya hai..kuch to bolo...
ahem:- mom, m gopi ki wait kr rha hun... uske ane pr sab bta dunga...
(gopi enters the hall and greets everyone)
ahem:- gopi come here...... mom papa..kaka uncle... maine gopi ko lekr  kuch faisle kiye hain..
mom m gopi ko kuch dino k liye shimla lekr jana chahta hun... i need your permission
kokila:- pr ahem..
ahem:- mom.. please dont stop me... gopi has already suffered a lot.. now i dont want her to suffer anymore..
kokila:- ok ahem.. you can take her.. i am happy with your decision.. 
ahem:- thank you mom... gopi.. come with me(he drags her out of the hall and everyone stands there as a statue)
ahem dragged gopi to his room and asked her to sit. she was scared of him so moved a few steps but did not sit. ahem noticed the signs of hesitation on her face but he wanted her to feel comfirtable in her own way.  he came towards her and made her sit on the bed and himself sat on the knees in front of her.
gopi, i have always tortured you, harassed you, never thought you as my wife, please forgive me.. i was a fool to think bad about you. please forgive me. i want to have a new relation with you. i would marry you once again and take all the vouches again.. please forgive me..
gopi who was shedding tears of joy, holded ahem by his shoulders and made him comfirtable on the bed and said ahem ji, i am your wife, u have the freedom to treat me as you want.. i am very lucky to get a husband like you. please don't  ask pardon from me. i am glad that you are ready to give a second chance to our relation and move on to have a peaceful life. ahem ji, i promise you that i will always be by ur side and support you in whatever you do.


gohem hug and the scene shifts to the hall where hetal n kokila are discussing about the gohem trip..
mota bhabhi hme bacho k jane k liye sbhi intezam jldi se krne chahiye..  acha h thoda samay(time) ek sath bitayenge to ek dusre ko or samajh payenge...
ha kokila yeh tumne thik kha.. ahem bohot khush tha aj.. bs meri to bhgwan se yhi dua h ki in dono ki jodi hamesha bani rhe...

THE NEXT MORNING
gohem are packing their bags and ahem accidently brushes his arm on gopi's waist... they have a cute romantic moment but are disturbed by kokila at the door step..

ahem, sara saman rkh liya na?
ji mom.

gopi, yeh kuch khane pine ka saman h.. ise dhyan se rkh lo..
ji maaji
kokila hugs both of them and blesses them with a long life ahead.. gohem now move towards the car after taking blessings from every one..
gopi keeps all the luggage in the back seat and gets in the car but ahem comes there and asks her to sit in the seat next to him..
gopi blushes and shyly gets in the car..

ahem gets on the drivers seat and whhooosh goes their car..

gopi is looking around very cutely and is amused by the beauty outside.. she is so engrossed in sight seeing that she does not realise that ahem had stopped the car and was smitten by her beauty. she was wearing a beautiful pink net saree
gopi was loving the scenic beauty when she realised a cold hand on her arms.. she immediately turned her face and was surprised to see the spark in ahem's eyes. she could clearly see love in them..




Sunday 9 October 2011

welcome every one!!

Hello every one!!
before posting my creations.. i would like you all to know more about me


i am jasmine.. a 18 yr old girl studying in class 11 (Delhi public school, Chandigarh.) 
i love reading and writing... i am writing since the age of 12 but at that time it was a mere hobby.
Gradually, as i grew.. i developed a passion of writing.. i started writing very short stories(for kids)and then i increased my level to writing articles for school magazines.. newspapers etc.. 

now i write fan fictions(relating to the shows being aired on Indian television) and some serious stories also

i am currently writing a fan fiction on naitik and akshara from the daily soap यह रिश्ता क्या कहलाता है 
I am also writing a story on relationships.. it is all about how every relation is important in our life and has its own priority in a persons life...


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