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Wednesday 30 November 2011

urshi in jail, gohem all the way part 2

LAST PART

jigar tries to put a brave face in front of everyone and cracks a joke to make the atmosphere a bit funny..

every one laugh their heart out only to find jigar crying.. ahem hugs jigar and tries to console him.. they have a cute conversation!!

ahem:- jigar, why are you crying for a lady who betrayed you?
jigar:- bhai, it is true that she betrayed me.. but i loved her from the bottom of my heart.. i cant imagine my life without her..
ahem:- jigar, i know it would be difficult for you, but see you have to be strong and move on.. & we all r with you.
jigar:- thanks bhai.. with my family around me, i am sure.. i ll forget everything and start life afresh... but
ahem:- jigar, dont worry about anything... n yeah, if you want, i can give you a project for which u ll have to travel around 10 states in India... should i??
jigar(excitedly):_ bhai!!! what all states would i travel??
ahem:- ummm, u ll travel Jammu & Kashmir, Nagaland, Andhra pradesh, Kerela, Punjab Chattisgarh, Goa, n a few cities too.. U have to plan out a survey on various construction sites and prepare a report.. we have a few delegate coming from australia for a deal!!
jigar:- wow bhai!! i am ready for this :) thank you bhai... U are the best bhai in the world:)
Ahem is happy that now as jigar will start working, he will easily forget rashi and start a new life..
he was also very excited to go out with gopi according to his plan..


he calls his mom and asks her to pack things for gopi and that she should not get to know anything about the surprise!!

he calls up a hotel manager and books a room for both of them...



he drives back home and on his way stops to buy a saree for her,

 a beautiful diamond ring and a few more gifts..




he came back home and asked gopi to get ready quickly as they had to go out for a business meeting..

both of them got ready and ahem quietly kept the bags in his car..
ahem is waiting for his princess to come down...
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he was mesmerised to see gopi draped in a blue saree n she completely looked like an actress.. he simply could not move his gaze from her..
he was brought into reality by gopi...
ahem ji chale??
huh.. ha chalo..

they both sat in the car and reach the hotel...

gopi is enthralled by the preparations ahem has done for their dream date!!
she is enjoying each and every scene...
ahem:- would you be my love??(he is kneeled down and is waiting for her to progress her hand...)
gopi(shyly):- ahem ji... ye..ap..
ahem:-sshhh... siraf ha or na mein jawab do...
gopi:-y..ye..YES!!!

ahem puts the ring in her finger.. and drapes her with the saree..

gopi was extremely touched by his gesture and had tears of joy..
ahems wipes them off and says... inko sambhal kr rakho... abhi yha inki koi zarurat nhi hai...

they both smile and hug each other... ahem orders some food for both of them in the room :)
 and the scene shifts to the modi house where jigar is extremely happy and has gathered the whole family in the hall..
he tells them that he has bagged a project wherein he has to travel around 10 states of India and conduct a survey!!
 hetal:- shabaash mere bche!! kanha ji tumhe khub tarakki de...
every one is happy..


the waiter has delivered the food in gohem's room and gopi starts serving it in two different plates,, but ahem asks her to bring every thing in a single plate...
they both sit to have dinner.. ahem takes a bite and feeds it to gopi.. in the same way gopi feeds ahem...
ahem gets naughtier and he starts caressing gopi...
he asks her to continue feeding him and that he wants to be in her arms...
slowly ahem gets hold of the innocent face and gohem have their first KISS ever!!.. they were lost so much into each other that they had no idea what is going on around the..
it was just GOHEM, GOHEM, GOHEM

what if? VIRMAN OS

Ok, so we already know from the promo that beeji would not allow maanvi to attend the marriage but our maanvi -- can she stay away from her sister? lets find out..

BG:- maanvi.. 1 bat dhyan se sun lo, tum shadi m nhi aa skti to bs nhi aa skti.. or agar koi gadbad krne ki koshish ki to mujhse bura koi nhii hoga..
MANVI:- pr beeji..
BG:- bs.. mujhe kuch nhi sunna hai..
MANVI(teary eyes):- thik h bg..

she gets into her room and cries her heart out.. she gets a flashback of all the gudda guddi scenes and gets a faded smile on her face.. but is also angry on her self that why does she always land up in trouble while doing a good work!!


MANVI:- hr bar.. hr bar kuch na kuch to galat hona hi hota h mere sath.. aj us chep ki wajha se m apni di ki shadi m nhi ja paungi.. na to wo mujhe excite krta or na hi BG ko gussa ata.. m apni di k bina nhi reh paungi.. (she cries again).

JEEVIKA enters d room and senses something wrong..
Mannu, kya hua? teri tabiyat to thik hai na? dawai li tune?? kya hua tujhe.. *she holds her face* arre tu ro kyu rhi hai?
*wiping off her tears* kuch nhi di.. yeh to khushi k aansu hai.. mai apke liye bohot khush hun..
mannu... (they have an emotional hug) wherin manvi speaks in the background.. di... apko kaise btaun bg ne mujhe kya saza di hai.. mere liye isse dukh bhari nat or kya ho skti h...
*jeevika realises that she is left with very less time * mannu, tu meri madan nhi karegi taiyar hone m??
MANVI:- ha.. karungi na.. chlo!!
with watery eyes she helps her sister in putting the jewellry and all the accessories.
BG and all come into the room n completely ignore maanvi.. and take jeevika along with them..
maanvi comes along her till the door way and makes an excuse of some work..

she bolts her room and cries until she faints..

jeevika n the other ppl reach the mandap where viren is eagerly waiting for her.. as she steps in the madap, they both have a cute eye lock.. and in the back ground we have their tu hi tu song going on... 



Virat who realized Manvi is not there asks Jeevika where she is n she said ' Manvi said she will be bk in 10mins ' 

Virat waited there as he thought bhai's salli will come to take his shoes n still she is missin !! kuch plannin toh nahin kar rahi...? 
untill he hears BG& Swamini Bua's conversation 
BG: Swamini ji...Dil pe Patar rak kar meine Manvi ko uski Apni Behn Ki Shadi se Aane ke liye Mana Kardiya!! Ab Apko Koi Takleef Nahin hogi!! 

Egoistic Swamini doesn't reply but gives her the 'Good' look!! 
virat hearing this gets annoyed ' How can Bua be so heartless!! I know Manvi is a bit immature! and wat she did y-day was not right ! but she didn't mean it in a bad way! then why this? how can she tell a SISTER TO NOT ATTEND her OWN sisters Wedding? !! Harsh Much ! 

he gets really annoyed n walk upstairs looking for Manvi! and enters in there room sees Manvi on the floor unconsious !! n runs to her! sits on the floor Placing her head on his lap ' MAnvi!!! Manvi Uttho! unconscious Manvi says ' BG mujhe Maaf kardo!! Mein Kabhi... Yeh Nahin chahti !! Virat throws water on her face and Manvi comes to her sense 
Virat : Manvi tum theek toh ho!! 

she gets up and says I'm fine ! aur tum yahan Kya kar rahe ho ? !
Virat : Tumhe LENE aya Hoon !! 
Manvi gets up sayin : tum .. Jao Mein Aati hoon 

Virat : Manvi enough ! tum kab tak sabki Suno ge!! Mujhe pata hai Kya huwa!! Bua ko yeh Nahin Karna Chaiye ta!! 

Manvi : gr8 tumhe Pata chal gaya na!! u happy na ? !! Now Leave n GO ENJOY UR BROTHER's Wedding !

virat Gets annoyed n Holds her hand and drags her down stairs

Sunday 27 November 2011

ALL FOR MY LOVE!!!




Hello every one!! welcome to my fan fiction..

the characters in the story are:-
Rajan, Meeta, Aniket
Mahesh, Supriya, Anupriya
(more characters will be introduced as the story progresses)
it is a story about two families who are from a different class(in terms of money..) but are very good friends since their parents too were best friends... their marriage was fixed on the same date and in the same mandap!! and now both the ladies were in the hospital to deliver their baby...
the doctor informs everyone that meeta has delivered a baby boy and supriya has delivered a baby girl.


 a wave of happiness swept in the atmosphere and the men shared a hug. they were eager to have a sneak peak of their child...


the family had a combined naming ceremony and named their children as Aniket and Anupriya..
Both the children were dear to their parents and were the apple of their eye..
aniket and anupriya had a liking towards the opposite mother.. Aniket was happy in supriya's lap and anupriya was happy in meeta's lap.. there was no problem with it since both families lived in two seperate homes but were actually a single family..

years passed by and aniket and anupriya were put to the same school for education.

Tuesday 22 November 2011

my lady love


Manvi:- yeh chepu samajhta kya hai khud ko? m koi choti bachi hun jo khud ka dhyan nhi rakh sakti? m dr k pas khud bhi aa sakti thi. usko itni hamdardi dikhane ki kya zarurat?? she was about to speak more but again got a sudden severe headache.. she tried a lot to subdue it but could not and all she could do is hold her head tight until her mr right came and saved her from falling on the ground.. she collapsed in his arms and virat missed a heart beat. he felt needles pricking him hard on his heart.. he felt as if the whole world came to an end. he did not want his lady love to go away from his life... he carried her in his lap to her room and called the doctor home.. the news of manvi fainting spread like a fire and everyone was concerned about her specially jeevika. they tried waking manvi by sprinkling water n shaking her, but it was as if she refused to respond..
the doctor came.. he asked everyone to leave the room but virat and jeevika could not leave the most important person in such a critical condition. virat was all broken but showed a brave face in front of her dear bhabi..
the doctor examined manvi properly and prescribed her a few medicines..
jeevika:- dr, kya hua h maanvi ko? is something serious?
doctor:- oh ms jeevika, there is nothing to worry, she has a low blood pressure and is weak, so she fainted. i have given her a sleeping injection, please see to it that she is not disturbed. and take proper care of her diet and medicines..
jeevika:- sure doctor.
doctor:- mr viraat, please come out fr a moment, i want to have a word with you..
virat:- sure doctor..
virat leads the doctor out of the room and jeevika starts caressing her darling sister oblivious of the disease manvi was suffering from.
doctor:- mr viraat, its high time that manvi had an operation or her condition would worsen and she might die...
the last few words were more than enough to enrage virat and he held the dr from his collar and screamed.. what do you mean she ll die? you said that she has low bp, so how can she die?? speak up doctor speak up.. what is manvi suffering from?
doctor:- mr virat please calm down. i had to tell lie in front of her sister as i have no intentions to hurt her and make everything difficult to handle.. i suspect maanvi to have tumour in its second stage of growth, and if it is not removed now, manvi may die..
virat felt the earth slipping off his feet.. he still could not believe that a fun loving girl lyk maanvi could suffer from such a deadly disease.. he could not gather the courage to face her and his sweet bhabhi.. the doctor took leave from him and viraat banged his head on the wall as he had no excuse to cover up the truth that he could lose his lady love at any moment... he was drenched in the pool of thoughts to break the sad news to jeevika when he felt a soft hand on his shoulders.. he was shocked to see jeevika standing next to him all in tears... all he could do is hug her and cry his heart out...
 jeevika could not understand the reason for which virat was crying, so she broke the hug and asked him if everything was right!!.. bhabhi, the doctor has called us for a checkup in his clinic.. he did not tell me the exact disease manvi is suffering but he needs to do certain tests..
jeevika is tensed for maanvi and could not sleep that night as she wondered her future with manvi. there virat could not sleep as he could not let his lady love die. she had the right to get all the happiness and viraat could do ANYTHING for his lady love. Amidst all the confusion, tension, a new morning came up and virat and jeevika took permission from their family members to take manvi out for shopping(on pretext of a check up). virat had already informed his family about the condition of manvi, so no one objected. beeji was apprehensive to send manvi with virat so swamini asked viren to accompany them.
the couple first goes to a cinema n then shopping.here both of them do different shopping.. virman for virika n virika for virman.. they then roam around in the mall where once again manvi gets dizzy and faints.. virat informs viren to move to the doctors clinic and he would bring manvi too..
all four now meet at the doctors clinic and are worried about manvi... the doctor administers her an injection and asks virat if they are ready for the surgery.. jeevika gets a shock of her life and questions the dr.. dr please tell me what has happened to my mannu? what is the need of a surgery? viren tries to calm her down but all in vain... doctor:- ms jeevika, ur sister is suffering from brain tumour and it is in its second stage. if not operated she may die.. so please hurry up and decide what is to be done.. and inform me so that i can decide on a date to do the surgery..

viren asked jeevika to get back home but she refused and gave her consent for the surgery.. the doctor asked them to call him the next day for further details...
as the night progressed, tension brewed up in the choudhary mansion.. every one was anxious to hear the doctor's verdict!! mannu was sleeping like a small baby in jeevika's lap and beeji was sitting besides them.. the vadhera brothers were walking to n fro like a zombie in the courtyard... time passed by and the phone rang- making everyone stop their breath...
beeji:- hello
dr:- hello, can i speak to mr virat?
beeji:- he is sleeping, please tell us and we ll convey the message..
dr:- oh, actually.. i had to talk to him about manvi's operation.. our panel of doctors have decided to operate her next week on the 30th of this month.. please bring her to the hospital on 28th as we have to admit her in the ward..(beeji was shocked and had no words to speak... )
beeji:- ok, sure doctor! thanks for the information.

jeevika:- beeji, kya kha doctor ne?
beeji, 28th ko manvi ko admit karenge or 30 ko operation..
virat:- pr bhai, us din to bhabhi ki mehndi hai or 30 ko ap dono ki shadi...
beeji:- ha, maine unko btaya.. pr wo mane nhi...

jeevika felt that all her dreams had shattered and she could not handle anything... she stood there like a statue--- expressionless and numb...

viren:- beeji, hm shadi postpone kr dete h... manvi ka operation zyada zaruri hai...
jeevika:- nhi viren ji, shadi to usi din hogi... pr hm shadi k bad sidha hospital jayenge...
beeji:- jeevika:- aise shadi k bad hospital...?
beeji:- tum pagal to nhi ho gyi ho na? jeevika, dono m se 1 chuno... shadi ya hospital...
jeevika:- beeji, shadi k liye or koi shubh din nhi milega hme... hm yha pr shadi krne k bad manvi k pas jayenge... main dr se bat kr lungi, wo manvi ka operation sham ko kr denge... please beeji..
beeji looks at viren and signals him to answer..

Saturday 19 November 2011

urshi in jail gohem all the way!!

a short story on what can happen after kokila discovers the motive behind the sudden arrival of  nani in modi bhawan.

 it is dinner time and gopi is serving food to every one. suddenly the door bell rings and every one wonders who may come at such a point of night. kokila opens the door and is thrilled to see her mother on the door. she is surprised as her mother came without any prior notice but controls her curiosity.  every one greets nani and nani is very happy to meet her grand children- gopi and ahem.
she takes dinner with every one and talks about her trip to haridwar.
she then asks about rashi and everyone give her an excuse about rashi's whereabouts. Nani gets convinced and gets up to retire and asks kokila to meet her in her room as soon as she finishes her work.
kokila is enthusiastic to talk to her mom so completes all the work in a hurry and asks gopi to manage everything. she takes milk for her mom and proceeds..
koki(to herself):- maa achanak se kaise aa gyi? aj tk to aisa kabhi nhi hua ki maa bina phone kiye ayi ho.. kuch to gadbad h... lgta h maa kuch chupa rhi hai...
pta krna padega warna agar maa ne rashi k bare mein fir se puch liya to musibat khadi ho sakti hai..

she knocks at the door and greets her mother..
maa yeh lijiye dudh.. apka safar kaisa rha?
koili safar to acha tha par auto wala bohot paise leta hai or time bhi bohot lga diya usne..

maa ap auto se kyu ayi..? ane se pehle phone kr diya hota.. ahem aa jata lene..

arre main yha khud nhi ayi hun... 

khud nhi ayi hun matlab?? kon aya h apke sath??

arre mere ghar jigar ki bahu ayi thi.. whi layi hai.. mujhe ghar k bahar chod k pta nhi kha chli gyi.. uski maa bhi thi sath..  dono ko khi koi kam hoga isiliye mujhe yja chodkr chli gyi..

nhi maa un dono ko koi kaam nhi tha.. rashi ko hamne ghar se nikal diya hai or ab dono maa beti is ghar mein kadam rakhne k liye koi na koi bahana dhundti rehti hain.. jab or koi paintra na chla to unhone apki madad lene ki koshish ki..

pr koili bat kya hui hai? jigar ki bahu ko nikala kyu??
kokila narrates all incidents starting from the marriage and how urshi have always tortured gopi and how rashi wanted to become the queen of the modi bhawan..

kokila's mother is shocked when she gets to know the real face of urshi. she comes up with a plan and shares it with kokila..
koili kl hm un dono ko ghar bulayenge or main unse bat karungi.. agar to wo dono apni galti man jati hai to rashi is ghar mein vapis aa sakti hai warna main unko unke asli thikane pr pahuncha dungi..
kokila could not go against her mother so accepted to help her in the plan..
the next morning kokila calls at the shah house and jeetu picks the call. kokila tells him that nani has come and she wishes to meet urshi so they should come to the modi bhawan as soon as possible.. jeetu was happy but kokila still had no clue if she was doing the right thing..

she turned back and was stunned to see the whole family standing in front of her with horrified looks on their faces..
the scene shifts where  ahem was sitting in the balcony, sipping tea and remembering all the golden moments where he and gopi had a hug!! he also remembers how badly has he hurt her and how she cried on being denied education.. he felt bad for her and wanted to compensate for everything.. he wanted to start life afresh!!

he wanted her to experience all the happiness of life and cherish each moment!! he planned a surprise for gopi..
ahem took permission from his mom and gave her a slight hint about his plan.. kokila was happy that ahem now cared for gopi and wished to spend time with her. she took the blessings of God and ashed Him to bless her children.
at night after finishing all work, gopi comes into her room and laid her bedding on the floor... she was surprised to see ahem packing his bag and goes near him...

ahem ji apko madad chahiye?? layiye ise main kr deti hun...
ahem responds in negative and still continues his work..
she lies down and doses off to sleep in no time.. ahem gets mesmerized on seeing her sleep..
he completes the packing and sleeps..

the next morning, every one is stunned as police has visited the modi mansion..
ahem is in his usual angry mood and keeps mumbling.. pehle maa-beti ko bulaya, ab police ko bhi bula liya.. mom ap akhir krna kya chahte ho!!! kokila and nani bring out the true face of urshi and also show the video footage of them doing various kalakari's..

the police has no option left other than to arrest them and close in a lock up...
jigar is deeply hurt at all this and longs to run towards rashi but controls immediately as he does not want to see her face ever...

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