Friends Forever

My very first attempt at poetry! Please share your views!

i love all my friends

i thank GOD for showing me this trend

of love and friends.

they are my lifeline

and help me outshine

in the rat race of  excellence

they spread their fragrance

as the rose amidst its thorns.

together we cry 

together we say hi!!

together we play 

together we say

FRIENDS FOREVER

AND EVER!!!

Feedback is welcome... It keeps me inspired.. Thanks for reading :)