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jeevi were worried about the consequences of the surgery.. they had no idea if Maanvi will be able to survive or will she leave them with her fond memories... jeevika still could not believe the fact that Maanvi has to undergo a surgery... her world had shattered... she saw no meaning to her life after Maanvi.. She wanted to do something for her dear sister. But how would she take the permission of Swamini.. She decided to discuss it with Viren and then make further plans..
Jeevika :- viren ji, are you free in the coming week??
Viren :- yes, i am almost free.. why what happened...
Jeevika:- woh, I wanted to plan a outing with maanvi and...
Viren:- oh, ok.. you dont worry about anything else, i ll take permission from dadaji and buaji... you start preparing, i will just go and check what is dadaji doing...
Jeevika:-... thank you viren ji...
Viren comes out in the living room and gathers the courage to talk with the elders...
Badi maa... dadaji.. mujhe ap dono se kuch bat krni thi..
Swamini:- Bolo viren... kya hua??
Viren:- maa, wo.. maanvi...
Swamini:- arre ab kya kr diya is ladki ne?? har bar koi na koi galti karti rehti hai...
Viren:- nhi maa... wo jeevika chahti hai ki maanvi ko khi ghuma liya jaye uski surgery se pehle uske bad pta nhi kab...
Dadaji :- viren thik keh rha hai... Jeevika aur maanvi ko khi ghum aana chahiye... Maanvi ka man behela rahega aur jeevika bhi thoda ghum legi...
Swamini:- pr bauji maanvi k sath viren kyu...??
Dadaji:- viren akela nhi jayega... virat bhi sath jayega... bacho ko ghumne do... yeh masti nhi karenge to kon karega...??
Swamini is all angry and is making all possible faces..
Viren thanks dadaji and takes blessings from both of them... Swamini is all angry and walks away from there..
Viren is happy and goes into his room...
Jeevika:- Viren ji kya hua?? apne dadaji se bat ki?? unhone kya kha?? arre kya hua?? hme permission nhi mili...??
Viren hugs her and says:- permission bhi mil gyi or maanvi ko company bhi mil gyi...
Jeevika :- company mil gyi matlab??
Viren:- Arre meri sweet si jeevika... mera matlab hai ki hmare sath hmara badmash bhai Viraat bhi aayega...
Jeevika?? Sach?? chlo acha hai... ham apni masti karenge or viraat manvi k sath khush rahega...
Viren:- tumne Maanvi ko sab bta diya??
jeevika:- Nhi... hum viraat or maanvi ko surprise denge... vaise kb jane ka plan bnaya hai...??
Viren:- jb bhi aap kho madam ji...
Jeevika:- Parso sunday hai... tab chle??
Viren:- ha sure... hmmm... ab rat bohot ho gyi hai... chlo sote hain warna hme bhi kl path suna diya jayega...
they both laugh and go off to sleep...
There in his room Virat is in a deep thought..
Maanvi ki surgery se pehle mujhe use btana hoga ki main use bohot pyar krta hun... nhi reh skta main uske bina... pr kaise btaun... darr lagta hai mujhe... khi use bhi na kho dun... nhi... aisa main kbi nhi hone dunga...
He slowly sneaks out of his room and enters Maanvi's room.. and is mesmerized with the cute sleepy face...
he caresses her face and talks to her in his mind..
Maanvi, you have to struggle this disease... You have to live for me... you cant leave me on a crossroad... and he hugs her...
wow...so far this is really good, this is exactly how it would have been! please write more, quick! im just dying to read the rest. and the ending of this is just too cute! i wish something like this really happens...awww virat likes manvi...(pinches cheeks*) just sooo cute. very well written, and i mean it, i enjoyed this thouroughly! i think that this should be more in story format rather than script, for that whole fanfiction style. also can you write most of the dialogues in english. although leaving such things as virats confession/thoughts as its too cute, but adding translations. and please i have a request, please can you write mire virman/ehmmbh fanfics fir fanfiction.net, it would be great if you do! i just simply adore virman to pieces and am hoping to read more fanfics on my favourite fanfic website.
ReplyDeletehope you continue! :)
virman <3!!!!!!
ek din ayegi, jab mein usko meri dil ki baat kahonge...bas vo din aaj nahi...
ReplyDeleteand it will come, that day when i'll confess my feelings. but how? and what would i say when i dont know myself. that, manvi, everytime i see you, you're always smiling. and it is that smile that makes my day. that you are always happy and you always manage to make others smile and take things lightly. and that everytime you're happy, i'm happy. that whenever im with maya, i'm thinking about you.
virman!!!!!
please let me know if you like. you're a really good virman writer!!
:)